Take a look at the item again:
A student fascinated with all things ancient Egyptian.
(A) Kemette squinted at
the computer screen, (B)
hoping to find the information she needed
(C) to finish her research
paper on Old Kingdom art.
You wanted to do this:
A student fascinated with all things ancient Egyptian. Kemette squinted
at the computer screen. Hoping to find the
information that she needed to finish her research paper on Old Kingdom
art.
Adding a period after screen creates a fragment. Hoping to find the information ... is a participle phrase that cannot stand alone as a complete sentence.
You might want to review the rules.
Go back to the sentence to try again.